Chanting Rain
by Steve Mitchell
when I ask
dancing fire and chanting rain
why so?
the why means nothing
the why is everything
—-
© Steve Mitchell 2012
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Heed not Steve
when I ask
dancing fire and chanting rain
why so?
the why means nothing
the why is everything
—-
© Steve Mitchell 2012
I like this a LOT. It is really close to how I was feeling and what I was thinking about when I created this: http://lesliepaints.wordpress.com/2010/11/29/primal-dance/
Thank you!
I really like the rhythm of your piece. Now that rhythm is kind of superimposed, in my head, with the words!